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The frame is supposed to be a slideshow.

Would LOVE some critique! ...pretty please :heart:

A whole lot of stock I know! From here as well as xchng.hu. I'll credit it all when I have time to figure it all out... I don't right now, I'm way behind on my final exam project and damn essay writing ...I HATE writing essays :confused:

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:iconnovaker:
congratulations amazing composition, have a nice day
:icontoni-dogma:
thank you! :heart: Have a nice day too :hug:

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Every time I look out the window, there I go, racing down the street... away from myself
:iconcherry-skylark:
Stella - now it looks great:) gives the feeling of cosiness and artistic studio:hug: the only thing which i can say is that maybe you can play a bit with the colours to make them look more natural - like this rooster on the coach is very bright or pillows. also the muffin looks a bit strange but as i said i really like the idea:hug:
:iconbpart:
:) hmmm...nice! I really like this artisty look :)
I was trying to check all details, as well as the overall look. Well, there are stuffs which are not fitting into the picture because of their colors, but I think it just make it more "dream-like" and interesting, so I'm not sure if I would change them. But I think they atteact to much attention comparing to the painting on the wall, or the menu on the top of the page.
And one more thing: for me, the menu and the name is too close to the edge, while there's such a "big" space under the sofa, where the floor is too empty compared to the rest of the picture.
These are just my thoughts, which I wanted to share with you, coz I know it can be useful to hear other people's thoughts before have the final version. ;)

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THANKS!
:iconeagleroses:
I really love it:) Totally yours;) hugs and hope to see you son:)
:icontoni-dogma:
thank you peter :)

They probably do attract a bit too much attention, it is all very bright and chaotic, but at the same time the style reinforces the style of the work and thus instead of destracting it strengthens the general feeling and style of the artist ...I hope. What do you think? Is it too distracting?

Also when the art is a moving slideshow it becomes a center of attention ...I hope.

The menu is a bit lower on the website :)

Thank you for your thoughts! ...they are quite similar to my own, matters which I've been trying to justify. :D

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Every time I look out the window, there I go, racing down the street... away from myself
:icontoni-dogma:
thank you! I was going for a cozy/welcoming atmosphere, glad you got that feeling :P

Yes I know, the rooster is pretty unnatural, I haven't touched the colours on it sense I think I'll be removing it later on ...and I just forgot about that muffin, need to fix those colours :P

Thanks for your input :glomp:

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Every time I look out the window, there I go, racing down the street... away from myself
:icontoni-dogma:
Glad you liked it! :hug: hope to see you soon too :)

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Every time I look out the window, there I go, racing down the street... away from myself

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